diff --git a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
index 3821fa59e47..893608cbbcd 100644
--- a/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
+++ b/nixos/doc/manual/release-notes/rl-1903.xml
@@ -31,37 +31,21 @@
- services.xserver.desktopManager.pantheon default
- enables lightdm as a display manager.
+ By default, services.xserver.desktopManager.pantheon
+ enables LightDM as a display manager, as pantheon's screen locking
+ implementation relies on it.
- This is because of limitations with the screenlocking implementation,
- whereas the screenlocker would be non-functional without it.
-
-
- Because of that it is recommended to retain this precaution, however if
- you'd like to change this set:
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
-
- to false and enable your preferred display manager.
+ Because of that it is recommended to leave LightDM enabled. If you'd like
+ to disable it anyway, set
+ to
+ false and enable your preferred display manager.
- Also be aware that we haven't enabled lightdm with Pantheon's greeter by
- default. That's because it has numerous issues in NixOS and isn't optimal
- for use here yet.
+ Also note that Pantheon's LightDM greeter is not enabled by default,
+ because it has numerous issues in NixOS and isn't optimal for use here
+ yet.