Fix many package descriptions
(My OCD kicked in today...) Remove repeated package names, capitalize first word, remove trailing periods and move overlong descriptions to longDescription. I also simplified some descriptions as well, when they were particularly long or technical, often based on Arch Linux' package descriptions. I've tried to stay away from generated expressions (and I think I succeeded). Some specifics worth mentioning: * cron, has "Vixie Cron" in its description. The "Vixie" part is not mentioned anywhere else. I kept it in a parenthesis at the end of the description. * ctags description started with "Exuberant Ctags ...", and the "exuberant" part is not mentioned elsewhere. Kept it in a parenthesis at the end of description. * nix has the description "The Nix Deployment System". Since that doesn't really say much what it is/does (especially after removing the package name!), I changed that to "Powerful package manager that makes package management reliable and reproducible" (borrowed from nixos.org). * Tons of "GNU Foo, Foo is a [the important bits]" descriptions is changed to just [the important bits]. If the package name doesn't contain GNU I don't think it's needed to say it in the description either.
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@@ -21,9 +21,7 @@ stdenv.mkDerivation rec {
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installFlags = "DESTDIR=$(out)";
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meta = with stdenv.lib; {
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description = ''Trusted Boot (tboot) is an open source, pre-kernel/VMM module that uses
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Intel(R) Trusted Execution Technology (Intel(R) TXT) to perform a measured
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and verified launch of an OS kernel/VMM.'';
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description = "A pre-kernel/VMM module that uses Intel(R) TXT to perform a measured and verified launch of an OS kernel/VMM";
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homepage = http://sourceforge.net/projects/tboot/;
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license = licenses.bsd3;
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maintainers = [ maintainers.ak ];
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